This has been my life recently, so I can really connect with it. I liked the overlay sort of effect, and the different timelines sort of interacting with eachother, it was a great visual representation of their lives.

unrelated, thanks for taking the time to try and help me on the forums :)

incredible

SOOOO damn creative, VERY well animated, and hilarious! great job!

YES!

I'm so happy this came out! I love this series, it reminds me of all the stuff i hate about anime :P amazing job.

pretty good

Like other people have said it's a bit too blank in some places, bit i'm strangely okay with that. I have been looking for the 4th bead for about an hour, i've even paced back and forth over the whole level and still haven't found it. Anyway the puzzles were good and I had fun.

it's great

but i hate it when i'm trying a bunch of different combinations, and then when it comes to one i've already done it does that whole animation again. i think it would be better if it would just sort of show an image of what the combo is if you've already gotten it, instead of getting rid of the menus you set up and whatever

awesome

i laughed so hard at the beggining. the game is great, even though i'm slightly dissapointed by the ending (what even happened?), but it's still pretty incredible.

okay...

you obviously like chess, that's fine. I don't know why there's steam or whatever all over, but i'm sure you had your reasons. the perspective on the chess board is fine, i don't know why you cut it off so short, but i suppose that's acceptable. there is, however, no perspective on the chess piece, which i believe is required. there also isn't much going on here, it's just a flat chess piece sitting on a third of a chess board infront of a bunch of green squares. I will however say that you got the colors right.

THINGS TO IMPROVE ON:
if you want to get serious about art, learn more about perspective. also try to learn to draw things that aren't chess boards.